I wonder what is it, that crawls inside
Penetrating my mind, heart, soul and every damn cell I'm made by,
As the day superimposes night
I wonder what is it, that I still can't hide, from me, from you
Something deep, pure,ecstatic and hard to describe,
As the world falls asleep bidding goodbye
Why I again feel the urge to feel you by,
my side,here, just you and me, that's all I need,
As the moments play seek and hide
I can't find, I try, I spy and I make them pop by
Finally here, on the paper, scribbling my present state of mind,
These words, knitting themselves to form a melodic lullaby,
For me to sing to you at night,
Let me play the seductive temptress and you be my brave knight!
Check out "Here Comes the Rain Again" By "Annie Lennox"
Have a good one, mates!
I'm speechless.
ReplyDeleteLet me play the seductive temptress and you be my brave knight! last lines say it all.. beautifully crafted.
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@ Smitten: Awww sweetie :)
ReplyDelete@Rachit: Thank you so much :)
ReplyDeleteHave a good one :)
Lovely. Love the phrase 'day superimposes night'. Beautiful creation!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Saru. Hugs all the way! :)
ReplyDeleteLoved it!... it's sooo awesome! <3
ReplyDeletetalk to me like lovers do, walk with me like lovers do,,,i envy yu, yu are amazing pretty lady,, loved the last line,,
ReplyDeleteXOXO
Skye
Skye envy's you in a positive way Risha, I agree with her!
ReplyDeleteGreetings,
Ted Parker
" Let me play the seductive temptress and you be my brave knight! " Loved these lines :)
ReplyDeleteHey Risha....lovely poem...its too sweet, filled with pure emotions...loved these lines :
ReplyDelete"As the world falls asleep bidding goodbye
Why I again feel the urge to feel you by,
my side,here, just you and me, that's all I need,"
and yeah...
Somehow ur poetry reminds me of the way I write as well...rhyme and simplicity...hi five:D;)
A magical post!!! :)
ReplyDelete@ Devil in Disguise: Glad that it made you feel that way :)
ReplyDelete@ Skye: Now That's the song I was talking about. Simply flawless. I think I have to put a playlist here on my page soon. And sweetie, I know how much you envy this blogger, You love her to the very core and she loves you back multiplied :)
ReplyDelete@ Ted: I know dearo. Thanks a lot both of you. It's always good to see you two here :)
ReplyDelete@ Drama Queen: Everyone seem to love those lines. That's sweet. Thank you :)
ReplyDelete@ Aakriti: Poetic Hi five ;) :)
ReplyDeleteAnd I've read your poems, a few of them, very simple and melodic with a unique element :)
Thank you so much for loving it sweetie :)
@ Dee: Thank you girl :)
ReplyDeletebadhiya hai:)
ReplyDeleteultimate..!
Thank you The Bebos ;) :)
ReplyDeleteWowwww! So, so heart-tugging!
ReplyDeleteThank you Twisha :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful...
ReplyDelete'As the day superimposes the night' - I particularly liked that, dunno why:)
Probably 'coz it's something we all can relate to very easily, Thank you Priyanka :)
ReplyDeleteWords are indeed magical, as they create a lovely melody.
ReplyDeleteLoved this line "scribbling my present state of mind" :)
They sure are, anyday!
ReplyDeleteThank you for reading :)
Expressive real Expressive. I got the link from Skye. Loved the complete thingy. Good Luck with the rest. ciao
ReplyDeleteLove, Sam Jones
Skye's a sweetheart!
ReplyDeleteAnd Thank you for reading Sam :)
How often does God create poets who are as sexy as it can get :*
ReplyDeleteI lurrrrvvve your words :*
OMG, am I in love with them ? ;)
@ Ayu: Awww sweetie jholi.. That's making me blush and damn, it's embarrassing! :D :D
ReplyDeleteP.S: Same goes for you 2, I loooovvve them :* :*
Wow! That was magical! :)
ReplyDelete@ Vijay: Thank you for appreciating :)
ReplyDeleteyour little head is full of wonderful thoughts and you got an incredibly gifted way of painting them down on a piece of e-paper.I think my army of kids in near future will cherish you as their favorite true life rom-com writers of all times ;)
ReplyDelete@ Suri: Haha, I'm sure all your cutie pies gonna love me that way, and I'd consider myself lucky enough if I succeed to get on their favorite rom com writer's list :P
ReplyDeleteAlso, You're an amazing writer yourself, coming from you, this means so much :)
Love, Risha
...tere words ne to magic hi kardia yaar.....a straight from the heart poem....:)....thoda late pada maine...but worth reading...a gals heart n wat it feels n wat it wants...all expressed in a very sweet n romantic way...pure love this is...:).....truelyy........WORDS are sooooooo MAGICAL....:)
ReplyDelete@ Ojas: Your sugar coated comments are always welcomed and valued whole heartedly. Thank you for loving this one too. Thank you so very much :)
ReplyDeletei feel i rlly am no 1 to comment on dis. al u desrve z hapiness n luv n smyls.hw u wryt dese?? dey r spellboudingly fantabulously gr8... :*:)
ReplyDeletesuch a cute heart warming expression of true love and desires of a loving heart ....i never knew love could be so beautiful :):):)
ReplyDelete@ Sakshi: Sweetie, thanks a ton for loving this one so much. And your comments are valued to the very core. Keep stalking :)
ReplyDelete@ Parul: I was kinda sure that you gonna get this link ;)
ReplyDeleteAnd I feel dearly loved right now, know something love, indeed, is always that sweet and beautiful :)
Keep coming back darling. Hugs all the way :):)
I cant help but imagine how much romance your boy friend will get... Sigh :D :D :D
ReplyDelete@ Abhishek: Lol, better not imagine that. :P
ReplyDeleteMujhe bhi seductive temptress banna hai ab bas , bol diya to bol diya , teach me naa risha pls plsss plssss :D :D :D Cant't get enough of it so I keep coming back to it :)
ReplyDeleteRofl! Arre tu hai to ekdm mast si seductive temptress yaara!! :) ;)
ReplyDeleteAnd This is making me dance around like a crazy shitty ninja, okay, not like your irresistible ninja, but a mad ninja, you get me right, yeah so I was saying ke your words does that magic. They are heart tugging!
Love and more love, Your sissy, Risha :)
Awwww you my magical Moonlight this is everything I have been trying to mean but the words ditched me every time I tried :(
ReplyDelete'As the clock tickles by...' , trust me you captured my state of heart so well. :*
'Let me play the seductive temptress and you be my brave knight!'. Read over a thousand love poems but this so made to every corner of my heart.
Can you believe I literally had goosebumps reading this ? <3<3<3<3
P.S. Will you mind if I use your poem for my wedding night ? I know I sound miserable but can I please ? I can actually see myself sitting by his side and giving him this written on a piece of pink paper to read as he holds my hand :) :D :D :* :* :*
P.P.S. Your love is divine and blessed are people who can be in such love.You are 'AWESOMENESS' brought to life.