Just like sand castles being washed away by sea waves,
Life seems to be drifting away.
Trying to grab hold of it some way
Still it refused to bring me my day.
P.S: Check out 'Just breathe' by 'Pearl Jam' in the meanwhile.
Have a delightful one, mates!
P.S: Check out 'Just breathe' by 'Pearl Jam' in the meanwhile.
Have a delightful one, mates!
I love the song. Love Pearl Jam too! And the soliloquy too. So much love :D
ReplyDeleteAnd where've you been? :o
Such a beautiful soliloquy baybee! :*
ReplyDeleteAnd Pearl Jammmm! *sigh*
Lovely poem that was!! Brought out a lot of meaning with four simple lines!!
ReplyDeleteSandcastles and waves... nice imagery of words... nice usage of metaphors to describe what you wanted to!!
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful Risha.....so many feelings hidden in the four simple lines..I love it...
ReplyDeleteMaybe you need to build the sand castles away from the waves? Very beautiful poem :)
ReplyDeletenicely stated, and ii love that song nice choice :D
ReplyDeleteYes, BEAUTIFUL imagery! :)
ReplyDeleteMind blowingly you bind the words together and give it a life. :)
ReplyDeletethat was lovely.. and hey I love ur song suggestions coz I fall in love wid em :)
ReplyDeleteDusk turns into night, and there is always dawn coming after that.
ReplyDeleteSand castles can be built again even if they are washed away now.
Nice lines :)
:-Deelighted to bestow upon you The Versatile Blogger Award! Happy Blogging! :)
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I love this! And I just love staring at the picture! This is crafted so finely my friend, less words with abundance of thoughts pouring in :)
ReplyDeleteIts beautiful :D
ReplyDelete@ Crystal: I'm here, have always been. Just a li'l off the track now-a-days, ya know. And thank you dear :)
ReplyDeleteLove, ~Moonlight~ :)
@ OLMM: Hi-five sista sweet :*
ReplyDeleteLove, ~Moonlight~ :)
@ Writing Bee: Welcome to I-Topia dear :)
ReplyDeleteAnd thank you so much!
Love, ~Moonlight~ :)
@ Dee: Oh Thank you sweetie :)
ReplyDeleteLove, ~Moonlight~ :)
@ Hemant: I'm glad you connected so well. Thank you :)
ReplyDeleteLove, ~Moonlight~ :)
@ PeeVee: Wow, That was some food for thought :) Thank you Hon :*
ReplyDeleteLove, ~Moonlight~ :)
@ Trishna Sharma: I'm glad. Thank you girl :)
ReplyDeleteLove, ~Moonlight~ :)
@ Mirage: Thank you :)
ReplyDeleteLove, ~Moonlight~ :)
@ MNET: Aww, that was sweet. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteLove, ~Moonlight~ :)
@ CS: Yayy, I feel so happy when you guys listen to the songs embedded below the posts. Thank you Darlin' :)
ReplyDeleteLove, ~Moonlight~ :)
@ BH: Now those were really good lines! Thank you for sharing 'em here :)
ReplyDeleteLove, ~Moonlight~ :)
@ Dee: I'm elated at receiving the same, sweetheart! Gracious :)
ReplyDeleteLove, ~Moonlight~ :)
@ Prime Aque: That's a unique pen name! Welcome to I-Topia :)
ReplyDeleteAnd thank you so much, mate :)
Love, ~Moonlight~ :)
@ Ridx: Thank you :D
ReplyDeleteLove, ~Moonlight~ :)
Awww beautiful lines honey :* Expressed it all so well with so few words :* ***HUGS***
ReplyDeleteThe blog looks awesome now =d
ReplyDeleteLong posts,I want them back!!!!!!
*warm hugs*
Missing you. Where u been?
I reallly really like the layout =d
Take care. Stay warm Di.
xx
@ Deeksha: :*:* Hugs to you too sweetheart! and how's wedding prep going on, reeeaaaaallllllly excited I am, when are you tying the knot by the way Hon? :)
ReplyDeleteLove, ~Moonlight~ :)
@ Blahbaholic: Thank you My sexo arien sissy :* :) And silk wrapped hugs to you too!! :)
ReplyDeleteMissing you too, And I'ma here only, always was, forever will be :)
Keep rocking baby and love ya :)
Love, ~Moonlight~ :)
I love soliloquies. They remind me of Shakespeare.
ReplyDeleteI love your posts. They remind me of the beauty of life.
Back, cuz I was addicted to blogs like yours.
@ Ezazi baby: Yayy, I missed your words. You always make me smile pata hai :* Thank you my pretty young lady <3 <3
ReplyDeleteLove, ~Moonlight~ :)
"I wonder everyday as I look upon your face, Everything you gave And nothing you would take, Nothing you would take Everything you gave" :)
ReplyDeleteLoved the song :*
Its on 29th darling and I am excited too but don't know why a little scared too.Anyways I just hope its nothing abnormal :(
P.S. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and your lovely family and friends there.I will be gone for sometime but when I come back I will read it all :*:*:*:* :D
This one's lovely, really fast read, great lines.
ReplyDelete@ Deeksha: I'm so freaking sorry I couldn't wish you before the D-Day but it's never too late, and I know you'll forgive your moonlight haina.
ReplyDeleteSo, I'm talking to Mrs. Deeksha right now, wow, that calls for a champagne round no. Yayyy!! :*:*:* >>:D<< Hugs hugs hugs!!!
And baby, it's nothing abnormal, why would it be anyway, you love him, he loves you, what else matters. God bless you both and shower upon loads and loads of happiness and love which gets multiplied every year in the years to come, I pray! :)
Tell your hubby, He is one lucky dude! :)
And I love you, keep that breath taking smile on and keep rocking like always!
Love, ~Moonlight~ :)
P.S: The way you love P.S's makes me go gaga. And very warm chilly winters and christmas and a spotlessly awwfuckingawesome new year to you and everyone out there! :*:* <3 <3. You rock!
@ Sahil: Thank you so much fella :)
ReplyDeleteLove, ~Moonlight~ :)