Thursday, August 4, 2011

Smitten !!


Befitting like the wind,
Replenishing my soul
Is this all I ever wanted
Or there is still some more
I wish I could lay on you 
Feel those blameless raindrops 
Falling on your heart robbing face
Slowly, silently, it strolls
Leaving me amazed
By their unmatched sweetness
Shinning on your sinful skin
Like a ray of hope
Capturing this moment in my eyes
My gaze, not broken, right there
Let's fly away somewhere not known
Spend our lives together 
Forever on our own! 


Check out "Why don't You and I" by "Carlos Santana and Chad Kroeger".
Have a loving one, mates! 

52 comments:

  1. Risha!!!!
    What can I say....this poem sounds like a song and u got super romantic quotient in it...
    Wonderful.....

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  2. Plus Love is so in the air <3

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  3. Haha, yes, and blame it on this hopelessly amazing weather!! :)

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  4. Heya Risha!!! So whom u in love with...ahem ahem;);)....oooh...rain...warmth...love...:)
    these moments are absolutely spectacular..if only our images of 'our' life could become real.wouldn't it be splendid?:)
    nice sweet one

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  5. nice writing Risha.....

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  6. Oh-so-smitten!!!!!!!!
    Totallyyy adorable, risha! :D

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  7. It's superlative...It can't be better than this. Perfect expression...

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  8. BEAUTIFUL !!!!!
    Loved these line --> "Let's fly away somewhere not known
    Spend our lives together
    Forever on our own! "

    Wow <3

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  9. @ Aakriti: Haha, well, that's not something to be disclosed here sweetie :D
    And what if it's all in that small lil fantasy world in some corner of our brain, we can atleast try dancing to their tunes now and then. I love it. :P
    Thanks for dropping by :)

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  10. Thank you Twish soul sista :) <3

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  11. @ Saru Di: Know something, It's the best feeling when a fellow poet says anything like this. Glad that you liked it :)

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  12. @ Nirati: Thank you so much Hon :* <3. I love to make you grin like that :D

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  13. "Feel those blameless raindrops
    Falling on your heart robbing face" --- lines to resonate in hearts for a lifetime :) lovely :)

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  14. now you have 7000 page views... WOW :) congratulations to my army of kids' favorite rom-com writer :)

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  15. welll trust meeeee...u r in love....:)...:D.....writings only get better in love....:)

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  16. @ Suri : You know, I've a rock solid inspiration behind all those lines ;) :)
    And thank you so very much *GoingEvenMoreCrazier* for those words. :) <3

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  17. @ Ojas: So in love :P :) Thank you for reading dearo :)

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  18. n i'm COMPLETELY smiten by this one...:)...completely smacked...:)..:).... reading it over n over again.....yakeen ni ata??...jara tim diff. dekh dono comments ka.....:)..:D

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  19. Smacked, Umm, cool,I'm gonna use that word in my next post :P
    And it's always adorable to see your comments here. Thank you :)

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  20. Lets fly away, breaking the bonds with no regulations. :)

    Weakest LINK

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  21. @ Rachit: Nice set of words they are :)
    Thank you for reading :)

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  22. Lovd evry word of it..thanx for making meh happy 1ce again Risha...XOXO

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  23. And those words uh wrote fo me in that last post...m going right naw to my frnz plce to thank her fo makin meh read you..you're an angel..XOXO :*

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  24. @ Sakshi: Baby, trust me, I'm smiling wider than you right now. I mean, you are happy and what else is required! And I can be your angel, if you promise to remain crazy like this always :D

    Love, Risha :)

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  25. Lovely. That made me miss him :(
    And I love the picture <3
    Write more and more AND MORE!!

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  26. Aww sweetie .. Go grab him right away then ;) :)
    And I will and will and WILL !!
    Thank you so much for your words :)

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  27. its one heart robbing poem i bet.

    Hugs&kisses
    Skye Woods

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  28. Thank you Skye Hon :)
    Love, Risha :)

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  29. "Lets fly away at some unknown, where no one".....etc..etc..etc.....
    perhaps, at some point of life every one think this, at least for a moment.....
    Loved the flow or words...beautiful.

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  30. sory its,.... "flow of words"....

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  31. @ Irfanuddin: Very True Indeed!!
    Thanks for your words, Keep coming back :)

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  32. mmmmmm soooo romantic and it truly portrays the whole 'being smitten'... :) Nicely worded!!

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  33. Awww.. Thank you so much Dee :)

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  34. awwwwwwwwiieeee bhaggu so romantic .... who is dis lucky guy you hav fallen so truly madly deeply in lov wit haaaaaaaaannnn ????? tell me tell me tell me plsss plss plsss :) hugs sweety ;*

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  35. Hahaha lol. That's some seriously hawt stuff darlin' !! ;) :D
    Hugs and love all the way back. :)<3

    P.S: I giggle like an idiot reading your comments. Love 'em :) :P

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  36. hahahahah hawttttt ... sacchhhi me kya ????????? :P you guys must be very hawwwwtttttt together i am sure ;) chhhhooo chhweeeet :) :D

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  37. Hahahaha, Yesh yesh yesh ekdm sachi aur muchi me bhi :P :D :P
    I love the fact that you are my Newest sweetest Fellow Blogger on the block!! :)

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  38. Just landed here and lovin' your blog... This poem took my breath away... SO delicately spun.. Amazing :')

    Followed...Thanks for following me... :)

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  39. @ Ezazi: Thanks sweetie for your words. Keep coming back. Hugs all the way!! :)

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  40. Ananya Sharma8/10/2011 2:10 PM

    yo...nyzo

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  41. Smitten and how ;)

    Phew!

    keep it goin;)

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  42. @ Amit Charles: Haha, Indeed!
    Thank you :)

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  43. Jab bhi main padhti hun ye poem naa I feel ke yes this is so much like what I want , this is the way I want to love and be loved.. you make my day everyday risha darling sisso , hehehe :D :D :D oye sachhi mucchi me hawttt hai ;) :)

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  44. You are one hell of sweet sweetheart, you know that right! :) :)
    Nothing gives me more pleasure than hearing, "You made my day". The feeling is simply Wow!! :)
    And sach me ekdm smokin hawt hai janemann!! :D :D :)

    *Hugs*

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  45. Moonlight darling !!! You simply redefined the feeling of being in love with this one :* :D Your poem makes people miss their loved ones...WOW :)
    P.S. I love the comments on your blog :) Now that I know you actually wrote it for someone real , I feel he must be a really amazing and special person to deserve such expression of prettiest love :D :D flying kisses :*

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  46. @ Deeksha: You leave me astounded with such flattering lines, and how I love it outside and inside. :)
    I make people miss their loved ones, I so wanna pat on my back now, c'mon, I deserve it right. This was the cutest comment ever. Thank you and thank you multiplied. Hugs :) God bless you sweetheart!

    Love, ~Moonlight~ :)

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