Thursday, November 21, 2013

Who wants stars, I have you!

A feeling, one in a million, irreplaceable
Sheer calmness and tranquility afloat within him
Sending shivers down my spine, ineffable
Make it last forever, neither alter nor trim


He consumes me more than he’s aware of
Paves an easier more happier life
So beautiful and innocent, O’ dear Lord
The Man I dream of becoming Wife

P.S.: Dedicated to someone very special. I don't know but Romanticism is my thing and I'm not gonna get enough, not now not ever. I enjoy it to the core. BTW, how is everyone doing here? :)

20 comments:

  1. It is funny that someone's unaffected nature can entice someone so, so dearly. I hope the dream never passes.

    Be a romantic, just don't be a hopeless one :)

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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    1. All you know is one side of a story. And it's too late, I'm gone and it feels like Christmas ! ;)

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  2. After how long are you here my lady?

    The above words gave me goose bumps. Beauty they are :) :*

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    1. Yes sweetheart, Really long :)
      Thank you, beautiful that is !

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  3. Rish you created magic with your out-of-the-world wordsonce again.... incredible poetry

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    1. Aw, thanks Skye, long time girl, how are things and all?

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    2. well and awesome,, hows India and your vibrant pink city

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    3. India is sipping the cold weather at present, at least the northern part. And Pink city is awesome as ever, man you should sometime drop by!

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  4. These feelings are the most beautiful ones! Consuming us within them like the world outside doesn't exist!

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    1. Yes and we happily go along! :)

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  5. Yaa this feeling is amazing...

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  6. I remember feeling this way at one point in my life. Your words expressed such feelings so well. ♡ :-)

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    1. Thanks Irene, glad to have stirred a happy memory ! :)

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  7. I used to love it too but I'm older now and I just miss that feeling.

    /Avy

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    1. Put the blame on 'Age' to get out of things, haan? Avy darling, no one is older or younger to feel the universal feeling of Love.

      I'm following your blog already and I think it's awesome!

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  8. Loved these lines.....and below lines are so symbolic of romanticism in you :)
    "He consumes me more than he’s aware of"

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    1. Haha you bet. Thanks Hemant ! :)

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